Posts Tagged "Dreaded Rewrites"

  • I’ve gone longer than usual without a post, due to a perfect storm of factors — I had a business trip to Ann Arbor, a bunch of friends in town for Memorial Day, a nine-day trip to Iowa to play with my family (and work like a scullery wench to help get ready for my aunt’s wedding), and far too much catching up to do on the day job. Also, after spending many, many hours configuring the Wordpress options for this website, I found that logging into it and updating it was the last thing I wanted to do.

    But, I’m back, and I’m hopeful that I shall update this more regularly going forward. One of the things that I did not expect when I signed with an agent (although any sane woman, particularly one who has read as many publishing blogs as I have for the past year, would have anticipated this) was that I would suddenly have to give my deadlines with my writing as much consideration as my deadlines for work. Oh, I knew what I was getting into, and now that I’m in the position I wouldn’t want to be anywhere else — but if my agent manages to land the coveted multi-book contract, suddenly I have responsibilities and commitments. Given how little I like commitment, it’s a wonder I can even write romance in the first place; but now I have to follow through.

    However, in perhaps the best sign that writing is the best career for me, I find that I actually don’t mind that commitment. In my other, non-writer life, I hate committing — I don’t own a house, I’m always open to picking up and switching continents, and I haven’t lived in the same space for more than eighteen months in the past ten years. But the idea of committing to a long series of books, to delivering on deadline, and to building a base of readers doesn’t fill me with the same queasy “I’m trapped in a prison of my own making” feeling that I get with other aspects of my life — instead, it fills me with a true sense of excitement and an eagerness to just get on with it already.

    We’ll see if I can keep this attitude when the deadlines actually become crushing; the only one I’m working toward right now is getting a last round of edits to my agent, along with blurbs for my next books. I finished the edits tonight (pending a final proofread tomorrow), and so hopefully I’ll get everything to her this weekend. And then it’s fingers crossed that she can sell AN INCONVENIENT MARRIAGE while I furiously finish Madeleine and Ferguson’s story in anticipation of putting it on the market next.

    Going forward, though, I intend to check in here at least twice a week. If you have suggested blog topics, let me know!


    | Dreaded Rewrites | In Search of Publication | Writing Career |
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    Posted 21 June 2009, 12:08 am

  • It is another cold and rainy weekend in San Francisco. It’s unclear to me what SF has done to offend the weather gods, but for whatever reason, it feels like the weeks are nice and the weekends are not so nice. Obviously I would prefer to have it be the other way around, but I suppose there is something to be said for the “inspiration” the rain provides for my British-set romance novels.

    I’m still slogging through edits for AN INCONVENIENT MARRIAGE, but I believe that I can be done tonight. Then it’s back to the grind in multiple capacities — both in my day job, which will be somewhat intense this week, and in my writing job, which demands that I start querying my heart out.

    Okay, it’s time to find a coffee shop and hole up there for the immediate future. Happy Sunday!


    | Dreaded Rewrites | San Francisco |
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    Posted 3 May 2009, 8:50 am

  • One of the problems that I have when writing is that I forget to take breaks. Another problem is that I like to write on my laptop while lying on my couch (as I am right now), and due to the unfortunate placement of all of the tables in my living room, this means that any drink in my vicinity is placed directly behind my head. So, while I have the remnants of an iced tea not two feet away from me, I’m still feeling parched because I don’t want to stop typing long enough to sit up, drink the tea, return to my prone position, and adjust my laptop for optimal typing. Then again, I’m *really* thirsty, so perhaps I should reconsider…

    Okay, I’m back. I was quite productive today, but almost all of it came between 6:30pm and 10:30pm. I also had a brief spurt for an hour and a half this morning, but between dropping off and picking up my car from the service station, mailing some stuff, eating lunch, reading a couple of chapters out of a creative writing textbook, and buying waaaaay too much stuff at Sephora, I had quite a lazy afternoon. I like to think it was just what I needed, though, and I’m feeling much more relaxed and ready to tackle more writing this weekend.

    I wrote 3258 words today, or approximately thirteen pages. This got me through the rest of Malcolm and Amelia’s wedding scene, and I’m about halfway through the subsequent breakfast. I intend to finish that scene tomorrow, then go back and revisit the first three chapters leading into the wedding to make sure they flow properly and are fast-paced enough to build reader interest. If I’m going to accomplish all of that tomorrow, sleep is imperative tonight, so I suppose I should go to bed!


    | Dreaded Rewrites | My Favorite Things | Sloth |
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    Posted 17 April 2009, 11:34 pm

  • I’m taking tomorrow off, and not a moment too soon — while I did manage to work on the rewrites for MARRIAGE on Monday and Tuesday, I failed in my efforts yesterday and today. I can’t let my progress stall; the Golden Heart nomination is a huge opportunity, but I’m not comfortable querying with what I have because I’m convinced that I need to rewrite a couple of chapters. Since my day-job boss is in town next week, my evenings are going to be booked up, and so progress this weekend is critical.

    Meanwhile, I keep watching the video of Susan Boyle’s performance of “I Dreamed a Dream” on “Britain’s Got Talent.” I’m a total sucker for underdogs, and her appearance and general demeanor made her the ultimate underdog; everyone in the audience was sure that this was going to be one of those cringe-worthy trainwrecks that happen in the early rounds of talent competitions. Instead, she performed “I Dreamed a Dream” so well that it’s gotten over fifteen *million* views on YouTube in less than a week, and pushed the original Broadway recording of the song back onto the Top 40 charts. How incredible is that? If I never sell my books, perhaps I’ll go on a variety show in twenty years and attempt to do a dramatized reading of one of my scenes, although I doubt that’s the best way to break into publishing.

    It’s bedtime; tomorrow, I have to drop my car off to get serviced, and then I’m going to seek out a cafe and write the rest of the day. What are your plans for the weekend?


    | Dreaded Rewrites | Inspirations | J'adore |
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    Posted 16 April 2009, 10:20 pm

  • Wedding bells are tolling for Malcolm and Amelia — for about the fourth time. After rereading AN INCONVENIENT MARRIAGE on Saturday, I identified a couple of areas that I want to change, and their wedding and subsequent wedding breakfast are at the top of the list. While the rest of the book is snappy and dialogue-driven, the wedding and breakfast are throwbacks to my first draft; I loved the concept and so kept the scenes virtually intact, but now they don’t fit in with the rest of the book, and the heavy usage of narrative instead of dialogue makes the pace come to a screeching (albeit brief — but not brief enough to maintain agent interest) halt.

    So the concept is staying the same, but I’m rewriting that section from scratch. I wrote four or five pages tonight while sitting in a cafe after work, and was intrigued to discover that, while I changed everything and kept only a couple of original lines, I told the same exact story, with totally different details, without deviating from the original word count by more than 100 words. This surprised me; clearly I have a strong sense of how long the scene should last, even if my version of the scene has changed.

    Overall, I’m happy with the progress I made tonight and am feeling much better about the rest of the edits on my plate. It was really hard to jump in at first; I “finished” AN INCONVENIENT MARRIAGE in December, and all of my creative focus has been on Ferguson and Madeleine instead. But once I started writing, Malcolm and Amelia came back to me — and I think they’re happy that their wedding is going to reflect the rest of their ridiculous romance.

    Now, though, it’s bedtime; I need to carve out some writing time tomorrow, which will be difficult due to an early-morning dentist appointment and a dinner engagement with some friends. Wish me (and Malcolm and Amelia) luck!


    | Craft | Dreaded Rewrites |
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    Posted 13 April 2009, 9:59 pm